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Post by Andy Jammer on Aug 30, 2010 15:14:26 GMT -5
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Post by Andy Jammer on Sept 18, 2010 21:12:14 GMT -5
The final fight has been added, and now the fights are finished.
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Post by Andy Jammer on Sept 19, 2010 12:10:39 GMT -5
Now I didn't ask this before...but is it possible that those who read the fights can give me some feedback on how they were?
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Post by glitters on Sept 19, 2010 12:15:29 GMT -5
 They were finely-written though I'm a person who never usually writes action scenes anyway, so as long as you kept my attention it was good. Which it did. I don't have a ton to say ^^;;; I'm sure you could point it out yourself when I say that at points a little cliché, otherwise it was still original in its own sense so it never made me roll my eyes (ie: "my friends are my strength" thing). I think the pacing was done wonderfully, it didn't go on longer than it should have nor was it too short and you kept the drama up the whole time. |
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Post by Andy Jammer on Sept 19, 2010 12:16:30 GMT -5
The cliche bits were intended actually.
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Post by glitters on Sept 19, 2010 12:18:56 GMT -5
lol that did cross my mind at one point XD; It was like "...you know, I'm sure Mike couldn't have written this without realizing just how cheesy it is..."
But that puts me 100% at ease then haha.
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They were finely-written though I'm a person who never usually writes action scenes anyway, so as long as you kept my attention it was good. Which it did.