Post by Aya Dauzi Invargas on Jun 5, 2012 9:54:28 GMT -5
I suppose I've felt a bit inspired by everyone writing backstories and such, that I had to write a small one this morning for Aya, it's a bit rushed but I figured I'd throw something out there for a morning's worth of writing before work.
As far as everyone's stories, just for the sake of time:
Mike: Your story was honestly what got me thrown into writing something quick, the emotion just inspired me the most and I was nodding by the end, like I accomplished a new style simply by reading the story. Ms. Hart, to avoid spoilers, is honestly someone I see sometimes in my life...it's disheartening. I click with it. I hope to see more sooner rather than later.
Volk, your story was quite a lot for me to handle in a short style of writing- I enjoyed it nonetheless, to see the lunar knight's origins more clearly, albeit not knowing a ton about their stories because of my lack of experience with their characters, I feel like I can come closer to your plans for the future of the site, and to see Xiza with more background, I see why he gained so much experience too. 25 years is a long time, and to see Trucido had influence even then was more telling of minor characters, old characters, and new characters that I hadnt known before. That's awesome in my book.
Jordan, the end picture was awesome. But let me talk of the story, I feel like I am experiencing the battle of Changban bridge. You have a style for both action and dialogue, and I felt like every character had some sort of personality that could come back as a reoccuring character. I found it fun as well as picturesque. I can't say anything about a good action scene but that I enjoyed it. ^^
Anyways! Sorry for piling it all on here..I just have work in ten minutes and I spent enough time writing when I did promise to read everything last night, which I did! But I was too damn tired to write my reviews of each. So. Thanks everyone. Hopefully my story ranges somewhere up there. I ...wanted to focus on a touchy part of Aya's past with no real direction to move, so I tried to tie a bit of his life together over the last couple of years to show why he may be as brash or as lonely as he throws himself out to be. I wish I had more effect with fighting scenes but I didn't want to draw that out. This is mostly a story of drawing emotion. Enjoy yourselves.
As far as everyone's stories, just for the sake of time:
Mike: Your story was honestly what got me thrown into writing something quick, the emotion just inspired me the most and I was nodding by the end, like I accomplished a new style simply by reading the story. Ms. Hart, to avoid spoilers, is honestly someone I see sometimes in my life...it's disheartening. I click with it. I hope to see more sooner rather than later.
Volk, your story was quite a lot for me to handle in a short style of writing- I enjoyed it nonetheless, to see the lunar knight's origins more clearly, albeit not knowing a ton about their stories because of my lack of experience with their characters, I feel like I can come closer to your plans for the future of the site, and to see Xiza with more background, I see why he gained so much experience too. 25 years is a long time, and to see Trucido had influence even then was more telling of minor characters, old characters, and new characters that I hadnt known before. That's awesome in my book.
Jordan, the end picture was awesome. But let me talk of the story, I feel like I am experiencing the battle of Changban bridge. You have a style for both action and dialogue, and I felt like every character had some sort of personality that could come back as a reoccuring character. I found it fun as well as picturesque. I can't say anything about a good action scene but that I enjoyed it. ^^
Anyways! Sorry for piling it all on here..I just have work in ten minutes and I spent enough time writing when I did promise to read everything last night, which I did! But I was too damn tired to write my reviews of each. So. Thanks everyone. Hopefully my story ranges somewhere up there. I ...wanted to focus on a touchy part of Aya's past with no real direction to move, so I tried to tie a bit of his life together over the last couple of years to show why he may be as brash or as lonely as he throws himself out to be. I wish I had more effect with fighting scenes but I didn't want to draw that out. This is mostly a story of drawing emotion. Enjoy yourselves.
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