A test comic

[Angelus]

Okay, after this I promise to take a break and stop posting pictures, but after I saw Jess's cool picture with the spirit controlling Jasmine's body and Micheal's cool drawling with Andy, I had to drawl something... sooo, I made a test comic to see if I'm any good at it. It's two pages based of the thread when Grim, Mark, Andy and Nero fighting.



thedarkvizard.deviantart.com/art/Captain-vs-Heroes-page-1-test-123588144

Wording if you have trouble reading:

((Block one)) Nero: No, I'm through fighting you.
((Block two))*Holds up his hand.*
((Block three)) Cero.
((Block four)) *Shoots Cero at Mark.*



thedarkvizard.deviantart.com/art/Captain-vs-Heroes-page-2-test-123588601

Mark's thoughts: So fast... I didn't even see it coming.

Caption: As the devastating power called Cero rips through Mark Grim and Andy keep fight. What will happen next!? See next time on Crepusculum Regnum.

Not sure if I'll make a comic. But anyway tell me what you think.

[glitters]

I wouldn't call this a "test", dear. :3 It's a comic to me. You have the panels ("blocks" as you call them) and the voice bubbles, and you've clearly put a lot of thought into your page design because you have different angle shots in every panel.

^_^ Just be proud of your work. I know, hypocritical for me to say, but really! I think your comic came out rather well, you should definitely provide more! (And if you're wondering, I'm writing up similar reviews on DeviantART as we speak)

[Angelus]

I have... no clue why I called them blocks. Must have been tired.
But thanks, I'll reply to the other comments you made on DeviantART.

[Alex of Santo-Luce]

Awesome! I can't wait, you're good. I still have issues varying my panels. I'll plan them out and realize I've given myself an extra slot and have to add a cheezy "The End" so it doesn't look wierd...

[Angelus]

I added the ending line just to make it look real... it sounded like a good idea at the time....

Anyway thanks.